Rate my French.

I've been learning French for over a year now, and I've received varying comments on my accent from natives, some having told me that I have a Québécois accent, while others told me that I sound German. What I know is that my pronunciation of /ɛ̃/ is a bit off, I've tried to change it but to no avail. My intuition tells me that my way of pronouncing /ʁ/ is probably too hard, besides that I also pronounce /d/ as /d͡z/ and /t/ as /t͡s/ when they're followed by either /i/ or /y/, which I've heard is a feature of Québécois French, but in my experience I've also heard some metropolitan speakers do the same. All in all, I'd like to get as close as possible to speaking as native speaker of mainland France.

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On s'est trompé lorsqu'on a cru que l'esprit et le jugement étaient deux choses différentes. Le jugement n'est que la grandeur de la lumière de l'esprit; cette lumière pénètre le fond des choses, elle y remarque tout ce qu'il faut remarquer et aperçoit celles qui semblent imperceptibles. Ainsi il faut demeurer d'accord que c'est l'étendu de la lumière de l'esprit qui produit tous les effets que l'on attribue au jugement. (La Rochefoucauld, Réflexions Morales XCVII)