Help on scales please !

Just wondering as a trad design do these scales look good or off ? I’ve had a look at other people’s work but still can’t quite make sense of em. How do these look ?

The line going through the centre is the spine.

Just wondering as a trad design do these scales look good or off ? I’ve had a look at other people’s work but still can’t quite make sense of em. How do these look ?

The line going through the centre is the spine.