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Updated my blurb! can I get your opinion? does it peak your interest? Thanks :D

Maylee finds herself transported into another world by a book she discovers in her grandmother's library, only to be captured by a  disgraced prince and his charming chef upon arrival. After learning a tyrant has murdered the prince's family in order to gain control over the land of Kanore, she joins her new friends on their journey to reclaim the throne. 

With the help of a marvelous alchemist and a small, furry creature with a big attitude, it seems like nothing can foil their plan. But soon their adventure takes a turn for the worst, and Maylee must use the book’s enchanted pictures to help determine how to save Kanore - and herself.